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Chadius: Added another pic of Mento

2006-06-02T13:49:19Z

Added another pic of Mento

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Chadius: /* Mento */

2006-05-02T01:09:04Z

Mento

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	Mento is a single father dedicated to protecting the innocents of his fair city. He also wants to join the Superhero Justice Squadron, the bestest superhero club known to man. He is also looking for that special someone to spend the rest of his life with, although he hasn't had much luck. He only seems to attract the dangerous types.		Mento is a single father dedicated to protecting the innocents of his fair city. He also wants to join the Superhero Justice Squadron, the bestest superhero club known to man. He is also looking for that special someone to spend the rest of his life with, although he hasn't had much luck. He only seems to attract the dangerous types.

	Mento wants to join the Superhero Justice ~~Squadron~~, '''bad'''. He calls them constantly, seeing if they've noticed his good deeds. He puts up with the redtape and long forms. Just for the chance to see Victory ~~Man~~, Dasoup, and the rest of the crew in action.		Mento wants to join the Superhero Justice Squad, '''bad'''. He calls them constantly, seeing if they've noticed his good deeds. He puts up with the redtape and long forms. Just for the chance to see Victory, Dasoup, and the rest of the crew in action.

	He loves his adopted son, Jack. They fight crime together, and Mento is a bit overbearing on him (but it's out of pure love.) Lucelia seems to follow him whenever he solves crimes but he doesn't mind (she's quite the looker, anyway.) He thinks Tinker is a glory hog, though, and can't stand his showmanship. Why don't people like Mento, anyway?		He loves his adopted son, Jack. They fight crime together, and Mento is a bit overbearing on him (but it's out of pure love.) Lucelia seems to follow him whenever he solves crimes but he doesn't mind (she's quite the looker, anyway.) He thinks Tinker is a glory hog, though, and can't stand his showmanship. Why don't people like Mento, anyway?

Chadius: /* Ms. Receptioninst */

2006-05-02T01:00:25Z

Ms. Receptioninst

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	Dasoup and Victory are good friends, from before the SJS was founded.		Dasoup and Victory are good friends, from before the SJS was founded.

	===~~Ms.~~ Receptioninst===		===The Receptioninst===
	~~Ms.~~ Receptioninst is the receptionist for the SJS. She is able to handle many calls at once, and has a perfect memory of her callers. Her powers, ironically, only really work when she's a receptionist.		The Receptioninst is the receptionist for the SJS. She is able to handle many calls at once, and has a perfect memory of her callers. Her powers, ironically, only really work when she's a receptionist.

	She is the first line of defense against telemarketers, solicitors, angry ex-spouses, and Mento. He's the most persistent caller she's ever met. No biggie, though, she can handle it.		She is the first line of defense against telemarketers, solicitors, angry ex-spouses, and Mento. He's the most persistent caller she's ever met. No biggie, though, she can handle it.

Chadius: /* The Slash */

2006-04-29T17:06:41Z

The Slash

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	===The Slash===		===The Slash===
	The Slash was a great hero. He was loved by many. Starred in his own TV show. And he made the ultimate sacrifice to save this world. He is Prick's favorite hero, nay, his only hero. The Slash ~~also helped make the SJS~~, ~~as one~~ of ~~its founding~~ members.		The Slash was a great hero. He was loved by many. Starred in his own TV show. And he made the ultimate sacrifice to save this world. He is Prick's favorite hero, nay, his only hero.

			The Slash made a superhero league, Justice Is Kewl. It had only a handful of members, but it is considered the prototype of the SJS.

	===Victory===		===Victory===

Chadius: /* Superhero Justice Squadron */

2006-04-29T17:04:37Z

Superhero Justice Squadron

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	===The Slash===		===The Slash===
	The Slash was a great hero ~~who~~ made the ultimate sacrifice.		The Slash was a great hero. He was loved by many. Starred in his own TV show. And he made the ultimate sacrifice to save this world. He is Prick's favorite hero, nay, his only hero. The Slash also helped make the SJS, as one of its founding members.

	===Victory===		===Victory===
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	Victory drives the Chariot of Victory around town. He tends to win major battles with just three words: "I AM VICTORY!"		Victory drives the Chariot of Victory around town. He tends to win major battles with just three words: "I AM VICTORY!"

	It is rumored that he built the Squadron's space base, but he doesn't say much about it.		Victory is one of the founding members of the SJS. It is rumored that he built the Squadron's space base, but he doesn't say much about it.

	===Dasoup===		===Dasoup===
	Dasoup is the strong, nearly invulnerable founding member of the SJS. He takes special care not to hurt anyone unless they deserve it, though.		Dasoup is the strong, nearly invulnerable founding member of the SJS. He takes special care not to hurt anyone unless they deserve it, though.

	His neice, Dasoupagirl, is also in the SJS, although in a much lower role. She's a bit more active with her powers, ~~though~~.		His neice, Dasoupagirl, is also in the SJS, although in a much lower role. She's a bit more active with her powers.

			Dasoup and Victory are good friends, from before the SJS was founded.

	===Ms. Receptioninst===		===Ms. Receptioninst===

Chadius: /* Superhero Justice Squadron */

2006-04-18T03:21:34Z

Superhero Justice Squadron

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	==Superhero Justice Squadron==		==Superhero Justice Squadron==
	The plan here is to make fun of as many hero stereotypes as possible. It's kinda like a big business, but the employees have...unique abilities.		The plan here is to make fun of as many hero stereotypes as possible. It's kinda like a big business, but the employees have...unique abilities.

			===The Slash===
			The Slash was a great hero who made the ultimate sacrifice.

	===Victory===		===Victory===

Chadius: /* Dasoup */

2006-04-18T03:20:24Z

Dasoup

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	===Dasoup===		===Dasoup===
			Dasoup is the strong, nearly invulnerable founding member of the SJS. He takes special care not to hurt anyone unless they deserve it, though.

			His neice, Dasoupagirl, is also in the SJS, although in a much lower role. She's a bit more active with her powers, though.

	===Ms. Receptioninst===		===Ms. Receptioninst===

Chadius: /* Superhero Justice Squadron */

2006-04-18T03:18:08Z

Superhero Justice Squadron

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	==Superhero Justice Squadron==		==Superhero Justice Squadron==
	The plan here is to make fun of as many hero stereotypes as possible. It's kinda like a big business, but the employees have...unique abilities.		The plan here is to make fun of as many hero stereotypes as possible. It's kinda like a big business, but the employees have...unique abilities.

			===Victory===
			Victory is an investigator with lots of gadgets and a cool car. He's mysterious, a bit broody, and never trusts anyone. Mento worships him a lot, and emulated his fighting style extensively.

			Victory drives the Chariot of Victory around town. He tends to win major battles with just three words: "I AM VICTORY!"

			It is rumored that he built the Squadron's space base, but he doesn't say much about it.

			===Dasoup===


			===Ms. Receptioninst===
			Ms. Receptioninst is the receptionist for the SJS. She is able to handle many calls at once, and has a perfect memory of her callers. Her powers, ironically, only really work when she's a receptionist.

			She is the first line of defense against telemarketers, solicitors, angry ex-spouses, and Mento. He's the most persistent caller she's ever met. No biggie, though, she can handle it.

Chadius: /* Superhero Justice Squadron */

2006-04-18T02:21:13Z

Superhero Justice Squadron

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	==Superhero Justice Squadron==		==Superhero Justice Squadron==
	The plan here is to make fun of as many hero stereotypes as possible.		The plan here is to make fun of as many hero stereotypes as possible. It's kinda like a big business, but the employees have...unique abilities.

Chadius: /* Prick */

2006-04-18T01:50:25Z

Prick

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	Prick is, unlike most other teenagers, pragmatic. The only hero he looks up to is The Slash, who saved his life a few years ago. Prick hates authority and large heirarchies, especially the Superhero Justice Squad. Well, he also likes Mento, but that's because Mento adopted him three years ago.		Prick is, unlike most other teenagers, pragmatic. The only hero he looks up to is The Slash, who saved his life a few years ago and died soon thereafter. Prick hates authority and large heirarchies, especially the Superhero Justice Squad. Well, he also likes Mento, but that's because Mento adopted him three years ago.

	You see, he can't remember much before he was 12, when Nate Menta adopted him. Not that it matters much. He doesn't know what his origins are, and it bothers him a bit. Although something seems to be calling him from then. Maybe he needs to read more back issues...		You see, he can't remember much before he was 12, when Nate Menta adopted him. Not that it matters much. He doesn't know what his origins are, and it bothers him a bit. Although something seems to be calling him from then. Maybe he needs to read more back issues...
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	Prick can extend spikes and blades from his body. His main weapons are 2 long spikes from his hands, with a unique "shpikt!" sound effect that no other superhero has ever used before. He can also cling to walls and surfaces (even though it makes a mess.) He can extend spikes from his side and use it to glide on currents of air.		Prick can extend spikes and blades from his body. His main weapons are 2 long spikes from his hands, with a unique "shpikt!" sound effect that no other superhero has ever used before. He can also cling to walls and surfaces (even though it makes a mess.) He can extend spikes from his side and use it to glide on currents of air.

	Prick is also very resilient to damage. It hurts like heck, but he just grows the damage back.		Prick is also very resilient to damage. It hurts like heck, but he just grows the damage back. Mento is still reluctant to send him out as the front-liner. Half protection, half showmanship.

	=== Lucelia ===		=== Lucelia ===

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