Introducing Hilarity - Revision history

Aurora: coments on damaged house.

2006-03-22T19:38:39Z

coments on damaged house.

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	6 bish sighs. The automated maintenance system has sprouted a fire extinguisher from the ground, next to Bish (A carefully hidden hole in the ground, I suppose.) Bish reaches for it. Hilarity is rilfing through the bag, searching for more candy.		6 bish sighs. The automated maintenance system has sprouted a fire extinguisher from the ground, next to Bish (A carefully hidden hole in the ground, I suppose.) Bish reaches for it. Hilarity is rilfing through the bag, searching for more candy.
	(Hmm, need to show the house damaged, so we can drive that point home.)		(Hmm, need to show the house damaged, so we can drive that point home.)<font color="red">(Actually, if the house is damaged, that attracts attention. Hilarity has started a fire in the basement. It's probably just a small smokey one. I don't really want to come back to the house being damaged all the time, because continuity sucks. ;P so let's claim that either A) a wizard did it (shiggy!) or B) it's a small fire that Bish can take care of on his own. -[[User:Aurora\|Aurora]] 14:38, 22 Mar 2006 (EST))</font>

Chadius at 18:48, 8 March 2006

2006-03-08T18:48:53Z

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	H: Candy!		H: Candy!

	6 bish sighs. The automated ~~defense~~ system has sprouted a fire extinguisher from ~~a deploy point nearby~~ Bish. Bish reaches for it. Hilarity is rilfing through the bag, searching for more candy.		6 bish sighs. The automated maintenance system has sprouted a fire extinguisher from the ground, next to Bish (A carefully hidden hole in the ground, I suppose.) Bish reaches for it. Hilarity is rilfing through the bag, searching for more candy.
	(Hmm, need to show the house damaged, so we can drive that point home.)		(Hmm, need to show the house damaged, so we can drive that point home.)

Chadius: Editted script again...

2006-03-08T18:44:37Z

Editted script again...

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	B: Groceries-		B: Groceries - sigh Great, a fire.
	sigh Great, a fire.

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	B: Hilarity. What was it this time? ~~My insurance~~ will go insane-		B: Hilarity. What was it this time? Insurance will go insane-

	5 (Hilarity jumps to the bag, grabs the candy, and jumps forward. I want 3 pics of her to cover this motion. They'll be in a single panel to represent the one quick motion she performs.)		5 (Hilarity jumps to the bag, grabs the candy, and jumps forward. I want 3 pics of her to cover this motion. They'll be in a single panel to represent the one quick motion she performs.)
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	6 bish sighs. The automated defense system has sprouted a fire extinguisher from a deploy point nearby Bish. Bish reaches for it. Hilarity is rilfing through the bag, searching for more candy.		6 bish sighs. The automated defense system has sprouted a fire extinguisher from a deploy point nearby Bish. Bish reaches for it. Hilarity is rilfing through the bag, searching for more candy.
			(Hmm, need to show the house damaged, so we can drive that point home.)

Chadius: Initial script written up.

2006-03-08T18:41:54Z

Initial script written up.

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	6 - Bish eyerolls, fire extinguisher in hand, smoke still pouring out from the basement. Hilarity is munching on a wrapped candy bar.		6 - Bish eyerolls, fire extinguisher in hand, smoke still pouring out from the basement. Hilarity is munching on a wrapped candy bar.

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			B: Groceries-
			sigh Great, a fire.

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			B: Hilarity. What was it this time? My insurance will go insane-

			5 (Hilarity jumps to the bag, grabs the candy, and jumps forward. I want 3 pics of her to cover this motion. They'll be in a single panel to represent the one quick motion she performs.)

			*In Bish's arms
			*Next to the groceries, reaching for the bar.
			*Off to the side, munching on the bar.

			H: Candy!

			6 bish sighs. The automated defense system has sprouted a fire extinguisher from a deploy point nearby Bish. Bish reaches for it. Hilarity is rilfing through the bag, searching for more candy.

Aurora at 18:05, 24 February 2006

2006-02-24T18:05:56Z

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	Aurora: needs more expansion. perhaps some eyerolling from bish and getting a fire extinguisher, showing that this happens all the time.		Aurora: needs more expansion. perhaps some eyerolling from bish and getting a fire extinguisher, showing that this happens all the time.

			Panels & Stuff:

			1 - Bish's kitchen. Bish is in background, coming in from garage with groceries in bag. Smoke is seeping out from under a closed door on the side. Bish looks surprised.

			2 - No people in scene. Door is now open, smoke is pouring out. Sound effects.

			3 - Bish appears with Hilarity in arms. His hair is mussed. They're both smudged with dirt. She looks unconscious.

			4 - Hilarity looks all starry eyed up at Bish.

			5 - Hilarity has candy. Yay!

			6 - Bish eyerolls, fire extinguisher in hand, smoke still pouring out from the basement. Hilarity is munching on a wrapped candy bar.

Aurora: Moving Z's comment to discussion page. That's where it belongs, Zee.

2006-02-24T17:37:42Z

Moving Z's comment to discussion page. That's where it belongs, Zee.

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	Aurora: needs more expansion. perhaps some eyerolling from bish and getting a fire extinguisher, showing that this happens all the time.		Aurora: needs more expansion. perhaps some eyerolling from bish and getting a fire extinguisher, showing that this happens all the time.

	You could have her half-knocked out, and he has to heroically carry her out... and she looks up at him all cheesy-romance... and then immediately breaks into the "ooo candy". Just to be misleading and Whedonesque. snicker -[[User:Zahnnie\|Zahnnie]] 15:33, 17 Feb 2006 (EST)

Zahnnie at 20:33, 17 February 2006

2006-02-17T20:33:11Z

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	Aurora: needs more expansion. perhaps some eyerolling from bish and getting a fire extinguisher, showing that this happens all the time.		Aurora: needs more expansion. perhaps some eyerolling from bish and getting a fire extinguisher, showing that this happens all the time.

			You could have her half-knocked out, and he has to heroically carry her out... and she looks up at him all cheesy-romance... and then immediately breaks into the "ooo candy". Just to be misleading and Whedonesque. snicker -[[User:Zahnnie\|Zahnnie]] 15:33, 17 Feb 2006 (EST)

Chadius at 14:50, 17 February 2006

2006-02-17T14:50:51Z

New page

Chadius: We should probably introduce Hilarity. Bish is coming back from the supermarket and she blew up something...or something like that.

Aurora: Like, smoke coming from the basement, Bish panicking and dragging her out, then her going "ooo, candy!" and completely oblivious to the damage to his house?

Chadius: Yeah, that's pretty kewl. Lemme dump this into a wiki.

Aurora: needs more expansion. perhaps some eyerolling from bish and getting a fire extinguisher, showing that this happens all the time.