Difference between revisions of "Introducing Hilarity"
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5 (Hilarity jumps to the bag, grabs the candy, and jumps forward. I want 3 pics of her to cover this motion. They'll be in a single panel to represent the one quick motion she performs.) | 5 (Hilarity jumps to the bag, grabs the candy, and jumps forward. I want 3 pics of her to cover this motion. They'll be in a single panel to represent the one quick motion she performs.) | ||
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6 bish sighs. The automated defense system has sprouted a fire extinguisher from a deploy point nearby Bish. Bish reaches for it. Hilarity is rilfing through the bag, searching for more candy. | 6 bish sighs. The automated defense system has sprouted a fire extinguisher from a deploy point nearby Bish. Bish reaches for it. Hilarity is rilfing through the bag, searching for more candy. | ||
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Revision as of 14:44, 8 March 2006
Chadius: We should probably introduce Hilarity. Bish is coming back from the supermarket and she blew up something...or something like that.
Aurora: Like, smoke coming from the basement, Bish panicking and dragging her out, then her going "ooo, candy!" and completely oblivious to the damage to his house?
Chadius: Yeah, that's pretty kewl. Lemme dump this into a wiki.
Aurora: needs more expansion. perhaps some eyerolling from bish and getting a fire extinguisher, showing that this happens all the time.
Panels & Stuff:
1 - Bish's kitchen. Bish is in background, coming in from garage with groceries in bag. Smoke is seeping out from under a closed door on the side. Bish looks surprised.
2 - No people in scene. Door is now open, smoke is pouring out. Sound effects.
3 - Bish appears with Hilarity in arms. His hair is mussed. They're both smudged with dirt. She looks unconscious.
4 - Hilarity looks all starry eyed up at Bish.
5 - Hilarity has candy. Yay!
6 - Bish eyerolls, fire extinguisher in hand, smoke still pouring out from the basement. Hilarity is munching on a wrapped candy bar.
1 B: Groceries - *sigh* Great, a fire.
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4 B: Hilarity. What was it this time? Insurance will go insane-
5 (Hilarity jumps to the bag, grabs the candy, and jumps forward. I want 3 pics of her to cover this motion. They'll be in a single panel to represent the one quick motion she performs.)
- In Bish's arms
- Next to the groceries, reaching for the bar.
- Off to the side, munching on the bar.
H: Candy!
6 bish sighs. The automated defense system has sprouted a fire extinguisher from a deploy point nearby Bish. Bish reaches for it. Hilarity is rilfing through the bag, searching for more candy. (Hmm, need to show the house damaged, so we can drive that point home.)
