Difference between revisions of "Introducing Hilarity"

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Aurora: needs more expansion. perhaps some eyerolling from bish and getting a fire extinguisher, showing that this happens all the time.
 
Aurora: needs more expansion. perhaps some eyerolling from bish and getting a fire extinguisher, showing that this happens all the time.
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Panels & Stuff:
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1 - Bish's kitchen. Bish is in background, coming in from garage with groceries in bag. Smoke is seeping out from under a closed door on the side. Bish looks surprised.
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2 - No people in scene. Door is now open, smoke is pouring out. Sound effects.
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3 - Bish appears with Hilarity in arms. His hair is mussed. They're both smudged with dirt. She looks unconscious.
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4 - Hilarity looks all starry eyed up at Bish.
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5 - Hilarity has candy. Yay!
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6 - Bish eyerolls, fire extinguisher in hand, smoke still pouring out from the basement. Hilarity is munching on a wrapped candy bar.

Revision as of 14:05, 24 February 2006

Chadius: We should probably introduce Hilarity. Bish is coming back from the supermarket and she blew up something...or something like that.

Aurora: Like, smoke coming from the basement, Bish panicking and dragging her out, then her going "ooo, candy!" and completely oblivious to the damage to his house?

Chadius: Yeah, that's pretty kewl. Lemme dump this into a wiki.

Aurora: needs more expansion. perhaps some eyerolling from bish and getting a fire extinguisher, showing that this happens all the time.

Panels & Stuff:

1 - Bish's kitchen. Bish is in background, coming in from garage with groceries in bag. Smoke is seeping out from under a closed door on the side. Bish looks surprised.

2 - No people in scene. Door is now open, smoke is pouring out. Sound effects.

3 - Bish appears with Hilarity in arms. His hair is mussed. They're both smudged with dirt. She looks unconscious.

4 - Hilarity looks all starry eyed up at Bish.

5 - Hilarity has candy. Yay!

6 - Bish eyerolls, fire extinguisher in hand, smoke still pouring out from the basement. Hilarity is munching on a wrapped candy bar.