Difference between revisions of "Talk:My Fearsome Craps"

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I endorse this page! -Zahnnie 16:30, 24 May 2006 (EST)

May 31 Steak Fart entry: 8.0 for style, 7.5 for background and content --Ratri 10:54, 31 May 2006 (EST)

June 6 Coffeemaker entry: Slow start. "Splattering shrapnel-shits" has an interesting alliteration to it. Overuse of the verb "pinch" can detract at times. Closing imagery is powerful and compelling. 8.3 for style, 7.8 for background and content. --Ratri 21:00, 7 Jun 2006 (EST)

June 7 Stress entry: Cannon metaphor reminiscent of previous entry's artillery imagery. Background is brief but comprehensive; not enough content details. 7.0 for style, 6.0 for background and content. --Ratri 21:00, 7 Jun 2006 (EST)

Pie for our judge. I think the commentary really adds, er, "something" to it. :) -Zahnnie 10:13, 8 Jun 2006 (EST)

Just so long as the pie doesn't end up "adding something"... in poo form. --Caryatid 07:46, 9 Jun 2006 (EST)

It's a whole new take on mud pie. Perhaps something in the realm of delicious chocolate pudding. --Aurora 09:58, 9 Jun 2006 (EST)

Not really enough for a story, but I took a crap just now. Did you know that Classico pesto-from-a-jar makes your dung smell just like Classico pesto-from-a-jar? The restroom smelled like an Italian dinner! And it was all still warm. I just thought you all should know. --Ubernerd 08:33, 16 Jun 2006 (EST)

Weird, I wonder if my homemade pesto does the same. I need to make more of that! -Zahnnie 09:16, 16 Jun 2006 (EST)

My bathroom adventures today (just now, in fact) involved a phenomena that happens far to frequently to me: Pooplets. Like, little mini shits that remind me far to much of M&Ms (this might explain why I don't like that particular type of candy.) They're just not as satisfying as pumping out a long, wholesome turd. - Aurora 14:15, 16 Jun 2006 (EST)

I like the phrasing there of "pumping out a turd". I think I'll go do that right now!-Zahnnie 14:50, 16 Jun 2006 (EST)